Descriptive Paragraph on the Ocean

/ Monday, September 12, 2011 /
















Here is a descriptive paragraph which Shreya wrote about the ocean, as we are studying it for one of our habitats in Science:

     Oceans are a delightful sight. You can see the sand and the water gushing to shore. You can smell the smell of saltwater at sea. You can hear water coming on to the bank, and if you put a seashell to your ears you can hear the ocean. I cna feel water, wet sand, and dry sand. Oceans are a really cool place to be!

Great job, Shreya! You helped us visualize the ocean so well!

4 comments:

Anonymous on: September 12, 2011 at 6:55 PM said...

I think the ocean is very beautiful and cool! Jadyn M.

Anonymous on: September 13, 2011 at 6:06 PM said...

Shreya is right - the ocean is a delightful sight! The ocean makes a perfect topic to write about when you want to include your 5 senses for descriptive writing!

Anonymous on: September 14, 2011 at 5:25 AM said...

the ocean is a very beautiful that picture macks me want to go there elaina

Rachel S. on: September 24, 2011 at 3:37 PM said...

I went to Virginia Beach, the Atlantic Ocean. It was very fun. I wrote a personal narrative about it! But in that picture above, it almost looks like Hawaii.

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